Sooo....this style isn't working. It's killing me to see the characters get progressively more hideous as the pages go by.
It's just proof that you really can't force yourself to change 'styles'...make improvements, yes. But not change completely. Guess it just doesn't work like that. :/

IMO, the best page was 2, then it all kind of went downhill. ^^;;
In any case, I have the inked lines for pages six, and hope to have a ton of pages to upload in the near future, along with some sketches and stuff to go with it.

Best way to get out of a funk is to produce some work you can take pride in, yes? :)